Friday, June 5, 2020

Kinged village

There was an Elephant lived in a village with Villagers and 1 kind Tiger the Tiger was locked with the Elephant
in a house, they were in a locked up house because they weren't trust to be let out free the Owner of the
village wants the village gone because there where 165 Villagers in the village and also the Owner wants
to kill the Tiger and the, Elephant but the Villagers tried to stop the him but the Villagers when  tried to stop
him killing the Tiger. But then the Tiger smashed the window and broke the door. The Elephant got angry
because the Elephant wanted to be free. The Owner ran because the Elephant heard the Tiger ran out
and broke out by breaking the door. What the Owner did he forced the Villagers to burn the place when
the Elephant came out it broke some house, when it didn't mean to it meant to escape but the Tiger went
stopping the villager but it was too late the Villagers rush to burn the house and ran at fast as they can
the Owner just left when the Villagers burn, all the houses Tiger escape with the Elephant. The Tiger and
the Elephant turned to best friends. They found a place and lived happily with a lot of food. But the
Owner survived. He never ever saw the Elephant, or the Tiger again because he thought they were dead.
When he checked the village he said “ Where is the Elephant and the Tiger? ” got mad and gave up killing
the Elephant and the Tiger.





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8 comments:

  1. kia ora Pranav, l'm Mekhi. You need to press enter at the end of a full stop. l like your writing Pranav lt looks cool!.

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    1. Mekhi, you have forgottten a capital letter at the start of you sentence. And why do you have two comments that are the same?

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  2. kia ora Pranav, l'm Mekhi. You need to press enter at the end of a full stop. l like your writing Pranav lt looks cool!.

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  3. You need full stops and commas,people aren't gonna be able to breath if you don't put full stops or commas

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  4. Kia ora Pranav,

    when you said and the last of your senescent, it says the Elephant and the Tiger, you highlighted lt. Can you not highlight lt?

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